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Post by caitlyn on Feb 27, 2011 23:27:23 GMT -4
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Post by purplemonkfish on Feb 28, 2011 15:53:05 GMT -4
That first layout... it's gotta go. Tiny font, all squished into box. Not easy to read. I note it IS paragraph formatted, but I think the layout is really disguising that, as I looked and it just seemed to be a wall o text. Remember, a decent layout will allow others to easily read your work. If we have to struggle, we wont read it and you wont get any crit beyond "ack! Kill that layout now!"
I'll read through it later... when I have more time. But that's my first impression for you.
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Post by caitlyn on Feb 28, 2011 20:17:48 GMT -4
ahh. thank you. c: the layout's old and neo's coding is evil. i haven't gotten around to fixing it or the pictures, so if you could put up with that for the time being, that would be amazing.<3
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